turma13's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[shark anatomy fail]

Anatomy fail indeed!

But your coloring and use of unsettling details (such as the humanoid face) are brilliant. Love it.

[Garruk Wildspeaker]

everytime I try to cast Garruk in FNM

he get's countered by a negate...anyway, nice reproduction. You should design your own planeswalkers ;)

PS: fingers crossed for an Urza Planeswalker

[There's No Return]

I like your use of lighting and details but...

the person has quite a few issues in terms of perspective and the location of facial features. The left leg and head/neck have an off perspective.

VeeWragg responds:

Ahh didnt realise that....probably wouldnt have if you didnt point it out, thanks ^.^

[Dragons farewell]

I'm just starting with PS...

...and was wondering how you did the dragon scales...lmk via pm or whatev if you can

-I like this pic. The composition with the one dragon super-imposed in the foreground is nice, but something about the eye seems awkward to me...I dunno--maybe it would help if the mouth were a bit more defined. I'd mess around with it a bit.

[FreekkXShow request]

hunt people?

I just wanted one to teach me how to get to the center of a Tootsie Pop...

I never made it. T-T

it has a very calligraphic vibe to it. I think giving it one really defined eye would help with the sinister look.

dommi-fresh responds:

ha ha yea i used a calligraphy pen so i guess its a good thing you think its got that style. ha ha thanks mate

[Crow to Carriongod]

good concept sketches.

reminds me of Huginn and Muninn

..makes me want to draw some ravens now.

[Arc de Triomphe]

yup

this was what I was talking about on the other one I reviewed. This one has great value and depth. I also like your perspectives. Good work.

[Taris]

nice

I always like architectural drawings of fantasy landscapes and cities. The shading is great, I just think you have to work on your value/depth a little bit, but good stuff!

[Appassionata]

Good work...

I actually knew it was Beethoven without even reading your description--so good work there. Is body and the environment are very emotive, but I think his eyes and/or mouth could be a bit more passionate. I like it a lot...continue with your art!

[Harshlands]

Very FF-like...

I still like it though. It's very whimsical. The girl's thighs and the boy's right arm are a little off, but other than that it works.